Amazing style
Your animation, style and art skills are among the highest I've seen on Newgrounds. That being said, I found your character design to be a bit on the dull side. While what they did, via their movement etc, was nothing short of amazing, they themselves didn’t look very interesting. They seemed more or less generic, even though they weren’t. It’s hard to explain.
I think the biggest flaw in this movie was the writing. While the story itself was good, the dialogue and one liners seemed a bit, well, immature and overused, although your characters seemed to deliver them quite well.
I don’t know. Overall, wonderful movie, honestly more interesting than most the cartoons I watch on TV.